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2017MBA提高英语作文秘籍

      同学们有没有听说过 “凤头猪肚豹尾” 的英语作文呢?太|奇MBA老师告诉你所谓 “凤头猪肚豹尾” 的文章,就是开头要写得像凤凰的头一样引人注目,中间要像猪肚一样有内容,而结尾要像猎豹的尾巴那样刚劲有力,这样的作文才可以被称之为 “佳作”。那么,怎么才能让作文具有 “凤头” “猪肚”和 “豹尾” 呢?今天,太|奇对开头,中间部分以及结尾的写作方法进行了归纳总结,供同学们参考。掌握了这些方法,英语写作水平瞬间提升一个level!

 

 

      作文开头句的作用,就好比一个人外貌最特殊的地方。你永远没有第二次机会,给别人留下第一印象。结识朋友如是,作文同理。一个最初印象,就给后面的阅读定下了基调,不是不能翻盘,只是需要付出更多的努力。因此,写好开头句至关重要。下面就分享了写好作文开头句的方法,帮助你hold住写作!

 

引用名句,起点高远

 

“引用名言名句” 的开头法不仅可以使孩子所要表达的意思简明扼要、言简意丰,而且能够集中表达文章的主旨,使文章增色不少。

 

实用名言名句 (值得收藏哦~):

 

Time is money.时间就是金钱。

 

Never leave that till tomorrow which you can do today.今日事今日毕。

 

Lost time is never found again.岁月既往,不可复追。

 

You may delay, but time will not.时不我待。

 

解析:这些名言均出自美国著名政治家、物理学家: Benjamin Franklin (本杰明·富兰克林) 之口,可以用于有关时间的 “论述性” 英语作文中去。运用这些 “金句”,会让文章显得很有 “逼格”。

 

引用实例,产生共鸣

 

引用一个自己朋友的亲身经历,或是亲身经历过的实例作为开头,可以增加文章的可读性,引起共鸣。

 

举例: 在写农村人口和乡村人口的变化 (2014年真题)时,可以举出一个实例作为开头,然后引出图表中的数据。

 

比如:隔壁王叔叔前两天刚刚为在城里定居了的儿子买了房,这种现象如今在农村并不是个例,如下图数据显示,如今有60%的农村下一代都去城里发展并且定居。

 

这样的开头会让阅卷老师眼前一亮,产生共鸣的同时又不会跟其他同学雷同。

 

古今对比,引出观点

 

通过对过去、现在两种不同的倾向、观点的比较,引出文章要讨论的观点。

 

举例: 继续写 农村人口和乡村人口的变化

 

比如:几十年前,农村人觉得去城里定居是做梦都不敢想的事情,因为去城里定居意味着是当地的万元户。如今,在城市生活不再是难题。根据下图显示,越来越多的农村人选择去城里定居...引出图表数据

 

开门见山,直抒胸臆

 

开门见山,直接了当地描述图表。本方法的模板也是最多的。建议大家把模板修改一下哦~

 

1)模版1 According to the chart / graph / diagram / table, we clearly learn that _________. There are many reasons accounting for _________.

 

(2)模版2 What is shown in the chart / graph / diagram / table above indicates that in recent years, more and more people pay attention to _________. The number of those who _________ has increased ________, and furthermore,____________. There are three factors responsible for the changes.

 

(3)模版3 As is shown in the chart / graph / diagram / table above, __________ has charged drastically in the past _________. While ___________,now the percentage of__________ is __________. Meanwhile, the number of _________ has soared up to ________.

 

英文的中间部分一般情况下是分析图表的原因,那同学们是不是在写作的时候如果对图表的社会现象不甚熟悉,时不时都无从下笔呢?

 

众所周知,英语二的写作题材一般是中国国内的社会热点话题。纵观改革开放以来的中国,确实发生了翻天覆地的变化,那这些变化背后的原因,可以总结为十大万能原因哦!

 

举例:

 

主观.1 经济繁荣发展,使得人们有钱做---

 

In the past few years/Over two decades,our country has witnessed/enjoyed an economic boom, which makes__主题__affordable for many people .They have adequate extra money to do sth.

 

主观.2 人们对高生活水平和高收入的追求,使得人们做---

 

Due to/Owning to/ Thanks to (由于)the adoption of the reform and opening policy(改革开放)/market-oriented society(市场经济), the pursue of living standards and high income make them to do sth.

 

主观.3 这个变化与人们的观点转变有关系

 

This change has a lot to do /much to do with/ great deal with people's attitudes towards/outlook on _(主题) .

 

主观.4 越来越多的人认为有了---,生活变得更加方便,舒适,多彩,有效,健康,经济实惠

 

A growing number of/the majority of people believe/reckon/claim(认为) that_主题___will provide them with more convenient approaches,which can make their life more colorful/enjoyable/comfortable/efficient/economical/heathy

 

主观.5 对职业发展的需求

 

A growing number of/the majority of people believe/reckon/claim(认为) that_主题___will give them more demand of career development, thus leading to 结果.

 

客观.1 主题重要性

 

主题 is something that we can't live/work without.

 

或:It is extremely difficult for us to imagine what our modern life would be like without 主题

 

主题 is the most important** in China. 类别1, 类别2 and 类别3 together are ways to tighten ties with each other. That’s why类别1, 类别2 and 类别3 are the top three expenditure of 主题 .

 

客观.2 社会认可

 

主题 can enable people to find a high-paying job easily. It is said that those who with___ can get an ideal post/position in China .

 

客观.3 生活节奏快,压力大使得人们没有时间做··

 

The fast pace of life and heavy pressure from work leave people little time,leisure or mood for doing sth.

 

客观.4 传统文化

 

类别1 is a very Chinese-characteristic way to show *** to each other in China. that's the reason why类别1 take up a% of the total expenditure.

 

客观.5 政府政策

 

This tendency is attributed to the government's bettering policies in -------

 

其次,英语二作文的得分点在于句型是否精彩,用词是否高级,所以英语作文想要拿高分,句型是关键。

 

作文分数波动大,可能是因为掌握的句型不够多、不够丰富

 

所以,为了作文高分,一定要积累高级句型,多多益善!

 

小编在此准备了40个高分句型,大家在冲刺阶段要记得勤加练习哦

 

举例:

 

1.主语+ cannot emphasize the importance of … too much.(再怎么强调……的重要性也不过。)

 

例如:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性都不为过。

 

2.There is no need for sb to do sth.\ for sth.(某人没有必要做……)

 

例如:There is no need for you to bring more food.不需你拿来更多的食物了。

 

3.By +doing…,主语+can …. (借着……,……能够……)

 

例如:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。

 

4.… enable + sb.+ to + do…. (……使……能够……)

 

例如:Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

 

5.On no account can we + do…. (我们绝对不能……)

 

例如:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

 

6.What will happen to sb.? (某人将会怎样?)

 

例如:What will happen to the orphan?那个孤儿将会怎样?

 

7.For the past + 时间,主语 + 现在完成式/现在完成进行时…. (过去……时间来,……一直……)

 

例如:For the past two years,I have been busy preparing for the examination.过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。

 

8.It pays to + do….(……是值得的。)

 

例如:It pays to help others.帮助别人是值得的。

 

9.主语+ be based on….(以……为基础)

 

例如:The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。

 

10.主语 + do one’s best to do….(尽全力做……)

 

例如:We should do our best to achieve our goal in life.我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。

 

注意:“尽全力”在英语中有不同表达。

 

例如:We should spare no effort/make every effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

 

11.主语+ be closely related to …. (与……息息相关)

 

例如:Taking exercise is closely related to health.做运动与健康息息相关。

 

12.主语+ get into the habit of + V-ing = make it a rule to + V (养成……的习惯)

 

例如:We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。

 

13.What a + 形容词 + 名词 + 主语 + be!= How +形容词+ a +名词+ be!(多么……!)

 

例如:What an important thing it is to keep our promise!= How important a thing it is to keep our promise!遵守诺言是多么重要的事!

 

14.主语 + do good/ harm to sth.. (对……有益/有害)

 

例如:Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。

 

Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。

 

15.主语 + have a great influence on sth. (对……有很大的影响)

 

例如:Smoking has a great influence on our health.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。

 

16.nothing can prevent us from doing…. (没有事情能够阻挡我们做……)

 

例如:All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims.这显示了没有事情能够阻挡我们实现目标。

 

17.Upon/On doing…, …. (一……就…….)

 

例如:Upon / On hearing of the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn’t say a word.一听到这个出乎意料的消息,他惊讶到说不出话来。

 

注意:此句型一般可以改为如下复合句句型。

 

例如:As soon as he heard of the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he ….他一听到这个出乎意料的消息,就如此惊讶以至于......

 

Hardly had he arrived when she started complaining.他刚来,她就开始抱怨。

 

No sooner had he arrived than it began to rain.他刚来,就下雨了。

 

18.would rather do…than do…(宁愿……而不……)

 

例如:I would rather walk home than take a crowded bus.我宁愿步行回家也不愿做拥挤的公交车。

 

注意:此句型可以改为prefer to do…rather than do…句型。

 

例如:I prefer to stay at home rather than see the awful film with him.我宁愿呆在家也不愿意和他去看那部恐怖电影。

 

19.only + 状语, 主句部分倒装

 

例如:Only then could the work of reconstruction begin.直到那时,重建工作才开始。

 

21.be worth doing (值得做)

 

例如:The book is worth reading.本书值得读。

 

21。Owing to/Thanks to sth, …. (因为……)

 

例如:Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。

 

22.主语+ is + the +形容词最高级+名词+(that)+主语+ have ever + seen(known / heard / had / read,etc)

 

例如:Liu Yifei is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen in my life.刘亦菲是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

 

注意,比较级也可以用来表达最高级的意思。

 

例如:I have never seen a more beautiful girl than Liu Yifei in my life.在我生活中我从来没见过比刘亦菲更美的女孩。

 

Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。

 

23.There is no denying that + S + V….(不可否认的……)

 

例如:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

 

24.It is universally acknowledged that +从句(全世界都知道……)

 

例如:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

 

注意,全世界都知道还可以改为以下句型:As is known to us/As we all know, …. (众所周知,……)。

 

例如:As is known to us/As we all know, knowledge is power.众所周知,知识就是力量。

 

25.There is no doubt that +从句(毫无疑问的……)

 

例如:There is no doubt that he came late.毫无疑问,他来晚了。

 

26.(It is) No wonder that.... (难怪……)

 

例如:No wonder that he fell asleep in class.难怪他在课堂上睡着了。

 

27.So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 从句 (如此……以致于……)

 

例如:So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。

 

28.形容词+ as +主语+ be,主语+ 谓语(虽然……)

 

例如:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

 

29.The + 比较级 +主语+谓语, the +比较级+主语+谓语(愈……愈……)

 

例如:The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力,你愈进步。

 

30.It is time + 主语 + 过去式 (该是……的时候了)

 

例如:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

 

注意:此句型可以转化为简单句句型:It is time for sth./for sb to do….

 

例如:It is time for lunch.该吃午饭了。

 

31.To be frank/ To tell the truth, …. (老实说, ……)

 

例如:To be frank/ To tell the truth, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice.老实说,不论你喜不喜欢,你别无选择。

 

32.it took him a year to do….( 他用了1年的时间来做……)

 

例如:As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book.到目前为止我们所知道的是,他用了1年的时间来写这本书。

 

It took them a long time to realize they had made a mistake.过了很久,他们才意识到犯错了。

 

33.spent as much time as he could doing sth.(花尽可能的时间做某事)

 

例如:He spent as much time as he could remembering new words.他花了尽可能多时间记新单词。

 

34.Since + 主语 + 过去式,主语 + 现在完成式

 

例如:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中,他一直很用功。

 

35.An advantage of… is that + 句子 (……的优点是……)

 

例如:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create (produce) any pollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

 

36. It was not until recently that….( 直到最近, ……)

 

例如:It was not until recently that the problem was solved.直到最近这个问题才被解决。

 

37.We will be successful as long as we….(只要我们……,我们就会成功的)

 

例如:We will be successful as long as we insist on working hard.只要我们坚持努力工作,我们会成功的。

 

38.No matter + wh-从句,…,

 

例如:No matter how difficult English may be, you should do your best to learn it.不管英语有多么难,你都应该尽你最大的努力来学它。

 

注意:此句型一般可以改为疑问词+ever引导的从句,+主句

 

例如:Whatever he asks you to do, please refuse him.无论他让你做什么,都请拒绝他。

 

39.It’s useless/ no good / no use doing sth. (做……是没有用的)

 

例如:It’s no use crying over spilt milk.覆水难收。

 

40.The reason why + 从句 is that + 从句 (……的原因是……)

 

例如:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气

 

预测趋势

 

如果图表作文的题材是好的一方面,文章的结尾就可以预测图表未来的走势。

 

举例: 依旧是农村人口和城市人口的变化时,结尾可以这样写:

 

Taking all these factors into consideration, we may reasonably predict that with the advancement of our society, the number of _citizens(主题)__ will keep increasing in the forthcoming ten years.

 

提出解决方式

 

如果图表作文的题材是不太好的一方面,我们就要提出解决方法,方法有三

 

(一)宏观方面的政府

 

政府能干啥?除了颁布法律法规就是出钱出物啦

 

举例: 1 政府制定相关法规政策:Our government should lay down the relevant laws to reduce the damage to the minimum piont.

 

2 政府投资(投钱/物/人力):Our government should spare no efforts to invest more money/material/manpower to find better facilities or subsstitute to beautify our environment

 

(二)微观方面的个人

 

个人在解决社会问题方面,只有一个做法,就是以身作则啦

 

举例: 公众应当要增强意识,违法的人需受到惩罚

 

Every one of us is supposed to be educated to become aware of the importance of ····/the significance of ····/the necessity of ··/the terrible consequence of ·· ·· / enhance awareness of … / alter their perception of …

 

或:The public should be reawakened to the importance of··

 

Those who violate laws should be punished.

 

(三)介于宏观和微观之间的媒体

 

媒体应当。。。

 

举例: Besides, the press should launch an ad campaign to appeal to the public to …

 

最后的最后再来一个倒装句做总结:

 

Only in this way can we solve this problem successfully.

 

can our society be relatively more prosperous and stable.

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